Mark Creaven, Wednesday Poets' session, Barton Public Library, October 12, 2022.
Our prompt was to take the last line of a poem to use as first line of our own. This first poem was Mark's take on that:
One could do worse than be a swinger of birches
How lonely it would seem
So far from town
To fill one's time just
Bending trees
Alone so far from town.
His amusement and his play
Will leave a stand of birches
Nearly all bent over or even broken.
We leave a trail too in our lives
Surprised
That some we thought could hold our weight
Turn out to be so brittle
While others do not break or bend
Instead bring balance
so as to hold our weight.
We seek their strength once found.
How lonely it would seem
So far from town
Just to fill our time
Alone
So far from town.
My
world is holding its breath.
Outside
the storm is fading.
It
was that simple, wasn't it,
to find the missing piece
of
me.
***
A PAST LOVE
In the early hours of the day,
when sleep
won’t come,
he shambles
through
his echoing
empty halls.
seeing a love
remembered.
Long ago time
swept her away.
Sand poured
through his
withered and
grasping fingers,
piles of all his now dead dreams.
Thanks for featuring Mark's poems! I had not heard a few of there. As usual they are devastating in their stark tenderness. Love that short one especially.
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